Friday, 24 August 2012

Schools, being our first step towards some exposure, lead us all to even bigger picture. Colleges seem like a door promising more freedom, more exposure but also more pressure. A poem which reveals a fresher's mind before setting off to open that door.


Born Again

My new innings are about to begin
Seems as if I am born again
I dream of having a brand-new start
That will be welcomed by all my heart
A life full of fresh moments
People with varied accents
Changed curriculum, distinct educators
A different roof filled with abettors
Waiting upon me to unfold
All the beautiful memories in its hold
But the fact being that I am real nervous
Thinking of my first day in college makes me anxious
Hundreds of questions at once rushing in my mind
Whether or not others will be kind?
Will they respect the emotions of a fresher
Or will they go ahead in building up more pressure
Will my fears indeed come true
Or they’ll be nice and do something out of the blue
 Can’t say what’s about to happen with me
All of this burning my head repeatedly
That ragging isn’t meant to cause fear or terror
But it is supposed to be a prime connector
Aiming to conjoin the seniors with their juniors
And not to treat the freshers as inferiors
A friendly intro is always pleasurable
With people all around you so affable
Because this is what makes college life such fun
Knowing the unknowns, with friendships just begun
Or maybe I am thinking way too much
And need to bury my thoughts in a hutch
Leave it all in the hands of my destiny
And wait for the first-day splash with glee
Of course all these fears won’t last for long
And soon my college will take me along
To a new world filled with new hopes
But till then, I’ll hang onto my dream ropes.

2 comments:

  1. the poem is good especially the theme
    and it would have been much better had you concentrated more on the emotional aesthetics rather than getting your words rhyme
    remember it is not necessary for them to rhyme
    but the emotional impact must be huge which gets wiped off if you spend your major time in searching for the appropriate words

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    1. Yeah I agree to that, it could have been much better because definitely there are so many college-bits lacking in this poem. I wrote it to get that initial frenzy out of me and I'll continue to write on this theme because it's the beginning of my college life as well. I've taken down your suggestions and I hope not to disappoint you the next time I write something.
      No matter what comments you get, they still encourage you to the core so thanks a lot for this gesture. I am happy for now, having taken some of your good time.
      Thank you once again.

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