Born Again
My new innings are about to begin
Seems as if I am born again
I dream of having a brand-new
start
That will be welcomed by all my
heart
A life full of fresh moments
People with varied accents
Changed curriculum, distinct
educators
A different roof filled with
abettors
Waiting upon me to unfold
All the beautiful memories in its
hold
But the fact being that I am real
nervous
Thinking of my first day in
college makes me anxious
Hundreds of questions at once
rushing in my mind
Whether or not others will be
kind?
Will they respect the emotions of
a fresher
Or will they go ahead in building
up more pressure
Will my fears indeed come true
Or they’ll be nice and do
something out of the blue
Can’t say what’s about to happen with me
All of this burning my head
repeatedly
That ragging isn’t meant to cause
fear or terror
But it is supposed to be a prime
connector
Aiming to conjoin the seniors
with their juniors
And not to treat the freshers as
inferiors
A friendly intro is always
pleasurable
With people all around you so
affable
Because this is what makes
college life such fun
Knowing the unknowns, with
friendships just begun
Or maybe I am thinking way too
much
And need to bury my thoughts in a
hutch
Leave it all in the hands of my
destiny
And wait for the first-day splash
with glee
Of course all these fears won’t
last for long
And soon my college will take me
along
To a new world filled with new
hopes
But till then, I’ll hang onto my
dream ropes.
the poem is good especially the theme
ReplyDeleteand it would have been much better had you concentrated more on the emotional aesthetics rather than getting your words rhyme
remember it is not necessary for them to rhyme
but the emotional impact must be huge which gets wiped off if you spend your major time in searching for the appropriate words
Yeah I agree to that, it could have been much better because definitely there are so many college-bits lacking in this poem. I wrote it to get that initial frenzy out of me and I'll continue to write on this theme because it's the beginning of my college life as well. I've taken down your suggestions and I hope not to disappoint you the next time I write something.
DeleteNo matter what comments you get, they still encourage you to the core so thanks a lot for this gesture. I am happy for now, having taken some of your good time.
Thank you once again.